Primarily, pollution affects the population because it leads to more diseases being spread and more people dying. deasies are the number one killer in the world today. they are the number one killer because if they are not handled with care and fast they can spread in your whole body and kill you. ."Swater people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhod and other diseases that can be deadly..."slums... are-in a sense- giant cesspools. Sanitation systems are nearly absent. Human waste leaches into the. slums are very dirty and nasty.

My out line x)

I.Introduction
A. A life with no sanitation and where filth is an everyday meal is not exactly the life anyone wants.
B. A slum is an overpopulated urban area that lives in poverty.
C. Slums negatively affect human population because they are very polluted, overcrowded, and no resources left
D. Toward the causes of why pollution affects the Human Populations in Slums

II. Defendable Point #1
A. Primarily, pollution affects the population because it leads to more diseases being spread and more people dying.
B. i."Slums... are-in a sense- giant cesspools. Sanitation systems are nearly absent. Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhod and other diseases that can be deadly..."
   ii. The unsanitation of slums affect the people by giving them diseases that can be deadly.
C. Slums are so dirty that the food and water that the people consume gets contamintaed which leads to them getting diseases that can potentionally kill them if not treated.
D. Part of the cause of the pollution in the slums is that they are overpopulated.

III. Defendable Point #2
A. Secondarily, overpopulation also affects people living in the slums.
B. i."Kibera's true population isn't known, but there are probably as many people living here as there are in San Francisco, packed into housing few Americans could phantom."
    ii.There is more or less the same amount of people in the slum as there is in San Francisco.
C.The slums are overpopulated and they are still increasing.
D.Even though slums being overpopulated the government still does not care for the people living in slums.

IV. Defendable Point #3
A. Lastly, all the resoruces like water food and shelter start to go down
B. i." The slums are like self-contained cities, but they operate with little official recognition or assistance".
   ii. slums have very little resoures and no help from the goverment
C. Slums get hardly any help from the government which means that they have little or no medications, no water, shelter, food so it is alwasy messy and ugly
D.That concludes how the slums are

V. Conclusion
A. That concludes why slums have a negative effect on people.
B. Slums negatively affect human population because they are very polluted, overcrowded, and have little to no resoureces
C. The pollution in slums leads to death. The overpopulation in slums affect the amount of resources people get. The lack of resorces can also lead to death.
D. If not properly managed, slums can eventually be more than half of the population.


i changed my theisies a little bit i think this sounds better 

Theises

there are many things going on in the slums. and no the slums in hollowood. the real slums. there are so many things that are bad. there is no food. no money. and really dirty